山野酒客 2016-04-11

寫我去過的一個美麗地方的寫作思路：

開門見山：

我去過很多美麗的地方，其中讓我印象做深的就是西湖。

主體內容：

西湖之美，美如史詩。古今有很多文人雅士都留下了關於西湖的詩歌佳構。

西湖之美，美在麗秀。

西湖之美，美在風物人情。

總結歸納：

西湖之旅，按照此類範文形式這樣寫作即可。

如：下面《我到過萬里長城》

我到過萬里長城

viting the Great Wall on Badaling

It is fine today。I with my parents to visit the Great Wall on Badaling。

We set out early in the morning。We first took the bus。On

reached the foot of the Great Wall，Iwas attracted by the

landscape immediately。“What a wonder！”Isaid repeatedly and me onto the cable car at once。We got aview of the beautiful

scenery。After a while，we got to the Great Wall。I was very

excited。I touched the bricks frequently。My father explained to me when and how we Chinese built the wall。I listened with

great interest。When we entered a turret，I was more curious。

Dad told me what the turret was and what it was built for。

“It was really an amazing achievement！”I gasped with admiration and took several photos。Unconsciously，we found we had reached the Stele of Brave Man，the symbol of the Great

Wall。

sansongtang 2015-03-08

one beautiful place I ‘ve once been to

淺碧鵝黃 2015-03-08

One beautiful place that i had ever been。