匿名使用者 1級 2011-03-21 回答

I want to be a doctor。This is my dream。Why do I want to be a doctor？ This is because my father。My father is a busy man who is working in a hosiptal，and he is 40 years old now。My good father is a professional doctor who is full of patient。All the patients were very happy because my father help them out of illness。I like seeing patient grateful smile。So ， my dream is to be a doctor。

中文翻譯

我想成為一名醫生。這是我的夢想。為什麼我會這麼想成為一個醫生呢？這是因為我爸爸。我爸爸是一個很忙的人，他在醫院裡工作。他現在已經有40歲了。是一個經驗豐富而且富有耐心的人。所有的病人都非常高興，因為我爸爸幫助他們擺脫疾病的困擾。我喜歡看見病人臉上感恩的微笑。所以，我的夢想是成為一名醫生。

寫作思維：

首先想想自己想做什麼。原因就寫寫你喜歡這份工作能帶給你什麼。。

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∮藍★天￡ 1級 2011-03-22 回答

everyone will grow up， grow up to work。 mom and dad often ask me what i want to grow up， in fact， i have a lot of ideas。 i want to be a policeman， that can catch the bad guys， i want to be airborne， because i think it is very brave， i would like to be a special forces， holding a gun and the enemy of war…… actually， i want to be a doctor。 i had never thought about it before， because i was a little afraid， and when the doctor was horrible， i had to deal with the dead。 but every time when i was sick of headache， fever， stomach pain， the doctor will always be able to help me heal， so i can return to a healthy and lively appearance。 i think the doctor is good！ also， my mother said she wanted me to be a doctor， she often said that if i later became a doctor， she was sick when i can find a doctor。 if i can use the skill， let the patient to cure the patient。 oh， that should be a great thing！

that‘s what i’m thinking right now。 grow up！ grow up， i will be able to let my mind to achieve it！

每個人都會長大，長大了都要工作。爸爸媽媽經常問我長大了想幹什麼，其實我有很多的想法。我想當警察，那樣可以抓壞人，我想當空降兵，因為覺得跳傘很勇敢，我還想當特種兵，拿著槍和敵人對戰……其實我最想當的還是醫生。以前剛開始的時候我還沒有想過這個職業，因為有點害怕，而且當醫生太恐怖，還要和死人打交道的。可是在我每次生病時的頭痛、發燒，肚子疼，醫生總是能幫我醫治好，讓我又能恢復到健康活潑的樣子。我覺得醫生好厲害啊！還有，媽媽也說想讓我當醫生的，她經常說如果我以後要是成了醫生，她生病的時候就可以找我看病了。如果能用我精湛的醫術，讓病人藥到病除。呵呵，那應該是一件很棒的事情！

這就是我現在的想法。長大吧！長大了，我就能讓我的想法得以實現啦！

匿名使用者 1級 2011-03-22 回答

你想讓別人幫你寫一篇作文還是教你怎麼寫呢？